#1
The night grew longer, darker;
Lonely as the moon,
with stars so far away.

The echo of music ramains
in the back of my head;
Slowly drifting in and out
of comprehension.

Something caught me,
my attention.
Something blue,
Cold. Sad. Never ending.

Could it be that this
Is myself?

Can someone identify this poem for me?
#4
It doesn't even rhyme. Didn't you know it has to rhyme to be a poem?
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#6
TS, the extent of my effort to help was to look it up on google, which didn't work at all. May I ask why you're searching for it and if you know the title?

EDIT: Reading it, it kind of resembles Margaret Atwood's poetry.
Last edited by st.stephen at Sep 28, 2008,
#8
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It doesn't even rhyme. Didn't you know it has to rhyme to be a poem?
#9
k, koo


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#10
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k, koo


I was walking down the street feeling blue
And that was when i saw you
I told you i did not know what to do
You stared at me for the longest time...
AND SAID K,KOO
#11
Google a verse, and put "poem" after it.


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It doesn't even rhyme. Didn't you know it has to rhyme to be a poem?

Are you serious? Poems don't have to rhyme. Some of the best ones don't.
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#12
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Are you serious? Poems don't have to rhyme. Some of the best ones don't.

He's joking.

At least, I hope he's joking.
#13
google it man
but get the spelling right first
Last edited by wombifat at Sep 28, 2008,
#15
You know if you can't find it on google you can totally claim it as your own.
Last edited by wombifat at Sep 28, 2008,
#17
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You know if you can't find it on google you can totally claim it as your own.

Dare you doubt its power!?

Hang the unbeliever!
#19
Quote by Iriathz
Are you serious? Poems don't have to rhyme. Some of the best ones don't.


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No it doesn't.




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