#1
This song Isn't really about anyone in-particular, I came up with the Chorus during English for some project and just worked on It from there.
Tell us whatcha think....

With You Once More

Dm|Am|Dm|Am

VERSE 1-
Dm Am Dm Am
Catchin' Train's, each one look's the same,
Dm Am F C Dm Am
Melbourne fame, who am i to blame,
Dm C F G G
I just want to be with you, with you again.

CHORUS-
Dm Am Dm
Today's gone, and when tommorow's born,
Dm Am Dm
I'll be with you, with you once more.

VERSE 2-
Dm Am
Southern chain's and double lane's,
Bm F#m Bm Dm
cruisin' down highway 61 now, ridin' Triumph's '81 wow
Em Am G Gsus4 G D Dsus4 D Dm
Just hit 190 on the freeway, headin' her way
Dm Em Am A
for rest i'll find none, 'till i find the one,
Dm A Am F C G G
and then I'll have won, 'cos then I'll be with her, with her once again.

CHORUS-
Dm Am Dm
Today's gone, and when tommorow's born,
Dm Am Dm
I'll be with you, with you once more.

VERSE 3-
Dm Am F C F C
Back in this Country now, for as long as they'll allow,
Dm Am F C F C
livin' life in the fast lane, was just a past game,
Dm Am
now i found a woman, i found love,
Dm Am
my only woman, my only love,
Dm F C G G
now I'm with her, with her once more,

CHORUS-
Dm Am Dm
Today's gone, and when tommorow's born,
Dm Am Dm
I'll be with you, with you once more.

INTRO RIFF
e|------1--1----|-------------------|
B|-1s3------3-|-3s4-4s3-1-----|
G|--------2-----|---------------2---|
D|---------------|--------------------|
A|---------------|--------------------|
E|---------------|--------------------|
#2
hmm... good verses...
perhaps you could possibly make the chorus longer. it seems quite short compared to the verses
thisismysignatureitisveryveryveryboringandasyoucanseeicouldn'tthinkofabettersigwhenididthissig
#3
Oh yeah, I was gonna leave it their, cos the instrumental's(Piano and Aocustic Guitar) kinda make up for that,
thank's anyway.