This is the beginning to a song im writing. Not very long yet and has a few things to fix up but i like it so far Anyway, try it out and tell me if you like it. Thanks
well, like you said it's not much yet.

but I did notice that it seemed way too slow. I think it'd sound cooler sped up but that's just my opinion. and vary the riffs a bit to make it more interesting. add some leads over that last part.

blah blah blah.

ya know. the works
...Nothing you've ever...
...Planned on ever turned out...
...The way you planned...

...You're still disappointing them...
sounds pretty cool:P wouldn't it be cool to let the clean intro continue while the rhythm comes in, instead of putting overdrive on it?:P anyway, sounds cool so far:P
Hey I really like it. Going from clean into distortion was a great touch, and sounded nice. I can't wait to hear the finished product!
New To Town With A Made Up Name

In The Angel's City

Chasing Fortune And Fame