#1
Your x's are like
Criss cross knots
Wrapped around
My heart teaching
Me how to suffocate
A REM sleep almost
But my breath is caught
Short and lost in your power
No no you're not worth it
I need my full nights sleep
Loosen up these knots and
This time leave me be.
#2
Very cool. This is subjective but I would have liked more detail describing the X's and how they are like criss cross knots. Its short so I think the first few lines need more meaning. Very cool ending though. Cool concept in general.