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Alright, I've been in a bit of a slump lately, rarely able to finish songs. This is the most recent one that I've actually been able to finish, so I'd like to get it out here. I realize there's a few big problems with it (which I have typed in bold) but I don't know how to fix them. Enjoy.


"Crossbones"

I'm sorry
I know how it feels now
And I owe it to God
So I won't take it out
On you

Dead Lord,
Hallowed be thy name
Hollow be thy grave
I overdosed on pain
But I'm not tired of suffering

I cross my bones in my sleep
I pray the dark my soul to keep
I'll try to drink myself to death
I'll hold my misery under my breath
I hope I don't wake up tomorrow
I wash all my pills down with sorrow
All my muscles are comatic
And all of my hallucinations are
Dead and gone

And as I bleed
I walk away
And see your face
In the mirror in front of me
But I know
It's just an illusion
Cause you can't possibly
Have a reflection

I thought I was your silver
But I guess all that glitters is chrome
I wanna be delivered
I hate me but love being alone

I cross my bones in my sleep
I pray the dark my soul to keep
I'll try to drink myself to death
I'll hold my misery under my breath
I hope I don't wake up tomorrow
I wash all my pills down with sorrow
All my muscles are comatic
And all of my hallucinations are
Dead and gone
That Cheap Fucking Smile Carries You To Bed

Those Lips Are Social Suicide But I Just Wanna See You Dead.
Last edited by dethskar0 at Sep 29, 2008,