#1
hi there!!!

finally im done recording my new song, its a 100% thrash metal piece again inspired in the World of Warcraft videogame ^^

prolly the song is too fast for my skill, but what the hell, I had a blast doing it!!!

http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/Gacel/music/all/play425500

sorry for the room noise, and I should really find someone to sing for me

C4C as usual

LYRICS:
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Sneaking past the enemy, rogues in stealth
Heading for the tunnel, that leads to the train
Thirsty for violence, they're ready to slay
every gnome or dwarf that stays in their way
All kinds of poisons drip from their blades
Behold their mighty weapons, devices of pain
Their hearts start to pound, as they get near
to the human city, Stormwind will cry in fear

Jump from the shadows, dagger in hand
Spread death and terror, bring them the end
Ambush, Backstab, tear off their flesh
The city of Stormwind is a gory mess

Slaughter

Chaos and madness, horrified screams
Countless corpses fill the streets
Guards and civilians, murdered the same
If you're a filthy human, you better pray

Pray, pray ...

Welcome to the Slaughter

Sprint through their city, the invasion's begun
People flee in panic, there's nowhere to run
Houses on fire, cut limbs on the floor
Slaughter in Stormwind, pray to your Gods
Last edited by Gacel at Sep 29, 2008,
#2
Crit as I go,

Love the fast intro, definally sign of good things to come. The second intro riff kinda slowed things down a little, wasnt too big into that.

The vocals are... a little weird haha! But atleast you tried and put your idea out. The lyrics are good tho, I think if you could get someone to do the vocals it would be a good quality track.

Over-all it definally has the potential to be a great song.

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https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=966183
#3
i like the music, the drums in the recording sound a little tinny, maybe toss some more deepend in and turn the vocals down and it'd be great... is there a bass in there?

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=16519363#post16519363

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#4
Cool Lyrics, great guitar. If you ever want me to track vocals for your stuff i'd be happy to do it. i can do any type of scream and can sing melodically ok.

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#5
I really like the guitar in this, driving and thrashing, just the way I like it. The drums were good, but as previously mentioned sounded a little tinny. The vocals were good just definitely not my style, so if there was anything I could say there iit would be make them a little clearer.

Thanks for criting mine.
#7
nice and thrashy man, but the vocals were bugging me, i agree with above, definately need some shouting... or a phil anselmo styled singer tone could use some work, but most recordings on this site are like that :P solo was interesting, but could compliment the song a bit more
#8
your medival (?) riff was awesome, i'd love to see those tabs sometime to elaborate on it.
#9
Quote by juzcook
nice and thrashy man, but the vocals were bugging me, i agree with above, definately need some shouting... or a phil anselmo styled singer tone could use some work, but most recordings on this site are like that :P solo was interesting, but could compliment the song a bit more

Agreed

I loved the guitar work but at times the vokills could get a little annoying.
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