#1
Is it wrong to say,
I know I'm more than this?
Is it wrong to ask,
For just one last kiss?
Pick me up by the wrist,
Reach out, touch my fingertips
And I won't let go, I won't try.
I never asked to fly.

She said "What a strange boy you are."
Well, what's the use in being strange
When there's no one left to believe you?
"Boy," she said, "you're so goddamn strange."

Is it wrong to guess,
You're not at all the same?
Is it wrong to ask,
Am I the one to blame?
Is it wrong to say, is it wrong to say
We're so strange?


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#2
did u watch the movie Hook on TBS last night cuz i did...and thats y i clicked the title "run home jack" cuz thats wat theyre sayin in the baseball scene lol


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#3
Actually Hook was my favorite movie as a kid.


And I saw it on HBO at 4:30 Saturday night haha.
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#4
Quote by Here_is_no_why
Is it wrong to say,
I know I'm more than this?
Is it wrong to ask,
For just one last kiss?
Pick me up by the wrist,
Reach out, touch my fingertips
And I won't let go, I won't try.
I never asked to fly.

cool man good opening, my only thing would be the rhyming of kiss, this, and wrist, it can be effective to rhyme like that but just didnt feel it here.

She said "What a strange boy you are."
Well, what's the use in being strange
When there's no one left to believe you?
"Boy," she said, "you're so goddamn strange."

hm well in this verse i think the word strange is overused, and i didnt reall ylike the last line tht much, other than that it was a good verse

Is it wrong to guess,
You're not at all the same?
Is it wrong to ask,
Am I the one to blame?
Is it wrong to say, is it wrong to say
We're so strange?

i like this ending, just dont feel that the repeated is it wrong to say, line is a effective or necessary


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good job overal man, just those few things, peace

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