#2
well no one has said anything so maybe ill help get the ball rolling. First of all its not really my sort of music so take what i say with a grain of salt

Its dark which is ok,
I thought the distortion was too much throughout the song. Tone it down a bit and make it cleaner possibly?

at 1:28 - 1:32 (ish) the lead guitar didnt seem to fit for me that was the only spot i heard it throughout the song and it just seemed out of place

I like what you have going on from about 2:10 - 2:35 (ish)

Overall, I think the song feels unfinished you need to tie the whole song together more. Not a bad start in my opinion, but like i said its not really my type of music so everything i said you can completely ignore

Good Luck!

-Soul

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https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=968017
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