#1
You stare at me.
I stare right on back at you.
Truth is, you know what im thinking.
Ive come to terms with what im thinking.
What am I thinking?
Whatever your thinking, is that what I'm thinking?
Right?
Right.


Chorus: Your just a clone of whats really me.
Staring back blankly for all to see.
Grasping my actions and swallowing my words.
Your nothing more then a mocking bird.
Judging my life by demanding perfection.
Unknown to me, your only my reflecton.
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I hide my guilt.
Maybe you wont find it ?
If this is only a mirror,
I'd like to hide behind it.

We are both solids,
I'd preffer to be a liquid.
Maybe then this glassy
fixation will leave me alone.

Chorus: Your just a clone of whats really me.
Staring back blankly for all to see.
Grasping my actions and swallowing my words.
Your nothing more then a mocking bird.
Judging my life by demanding perfection.
Unknown to me, your only my reflecton.
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I turn on a light ,
To get a better view,
Of whats really me,
Or whats really you.


I brush these teeth,
Comb this hair.
As you imitate what's
Gracefully been done.


Chorus: Your just a clone of whats really me.
Staring back blankly for all to see.
Grasping my actions and swallowing my words.
Your nothing more then a mocking bird.
Judging my life by demanding perfection.
Unknown to me, your only my reflecton.
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The time has come
To part ways with you.
To part ways with me.
Tommorow he waits.
For what only I can see.

My Reflection.
Write it down.
#3
Quote by stjohnson90
I like it a lot. Have you put music to it yet?


No I havnt. I will probably tackle it soon. Glad you liked it
Write it down.
#4
I really liked this. There were a couple of bits that didn't appeal to me, like the bruching you teeth part, I didn't really get that. Still a great piece, IMO.

Could you crit my piece now, please? Thanks.