#1
Im not 100% if this is where to put a post like this goes. I dont have any lyrics, but i have the main idea about a song for a band im trying to get together.

Intro Part 1: Slow clean guitar riff played twice.

Intro Part 2 : The same riff plays with a steady drum beat.

Verse 1/part 1: The same as intro Part 2, but with clean vacals, and bass.

Interlude 1: Heavy distorted guitar comes in.

Verse 1/part 2: The same riff as the interlude, with scream vocals.

Pre-Chorus: Same drum beat as Intro Part 2, with bass, no guitar.

Chorus: Half clean vocals, half scream.

Small After Chorus Solo: A little guitar solo.

Verse 2/ part 1: Scream vocals.

Verse2/ part 2: Clean vocals.

Interlude 2: A slow (but heavy), guitar harmony.

Main Solo: Its a solo.

Chorus: X2

Breakdown: Heavy with scream and clean vocal harmony.

Tell me what you think and any advice you may have. Thank You!
#3
Quote by TobyFellrunners
*reported*

This is for posting your lyrics or prose, should be in the techniques sub-forum.

Ops sorry, im new here.
#5
its sounds good to me.

has everything a good song needs.

its a little generic, but thats okay, cause when people try to stray from that they usually fail.
the generic structure works for a reason.

nice work.
#6
Quote by HethaHORRIFIC
its sounds good to me.

has everything a good song needs.

its a little generic, but thats okay, cause when people try to stray from that they usually fail.
the generic structure works for a reason.

nice work.

Thanks, ya I tryed to do something that wa different, but I guess I failed , lol .