#2
I love the tone. The bends around :40 sound a little out of place. Some staccato slides may have been more appropriate. Your distorted sound is kind of muddy, but your lead tone is spot on. I like the lead section. The riff after your descending lead lick is pretty sick. The little spot at 3:00-3:05 is very cool.

It does sound a little unorganized, but it's an improv, so that's expected. There seemed to be alot of tension building notes in the relaxed parts. The resolving note at 3:07 stuck out like a sore thumb to me.

Nice tone though.
#3
I liked the tone. Could use some direction in the beginning. Some nice little riffs in there though. Try to get your hands on some drum loops. Makes it more enjoyable imo.