Poll: como te llamas?
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purrrple
1 33%
green
2 67%
Voters: 3.
#1
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The cold wind takes chilling nips at my nose
and numbing its nerves
I freeze in silence
while waiting patiently
in thick brush of the woods

The brisk winter air seems to bring heat
to my cheeks and yet they tingle when touched
My ears began to burn as well
But all those feelings quickly went away
when my frostbitten ears perked
to twigs snapping in the distance
and movement soon followed to my left

With adrenaline fueling my body now
I lift the nozzle to my rifle
and with my stiff finger
just softly touching the trigger

The drifting snow whites my vision,
squinting to depict the silhouette
and realize it was only a fawn
wandering without his mother
So I relax for a minute

POP! POP!

I felt a sharp pain in my back
warming blood steamed from the wound
as my face plants itself into the snow covered earth
and the final sounds I heard
were the unmistakable gabbles of hadji gibberish



ta-da-duh

buildings and star-filled skies
play cards with my notebook's wife.
I fill lines with faces
just to see a smile.

my pen's ink is dry
and i am gasping for water.
parting from the moon landing in my room
with nothing but a blank page as a parachute

this is the part where my head falls off
and a bird whistles a melody for this poem i'll never finish writing

this is tonight
tonight is tommorrow
as water
is
water.
#2
vote!!!???!!!
Vivamus mea Lesbia, atque amemus,
rumoresque senum seueriorum
omnes unius aestimemus assis!
#3
green was friggin weird. got my vote.
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#5
Couple of things in green put me off, so purple for me.
Filth, pure filth... That's what you are.
#6
^ care to explain THW?
thanks for voting guys. any more votes? this closes in a few hours
#7
Sure, it was nothing major, nor was the piece bad in anyway, cause I did enjoy its quirkiness, but it was "buildings and star-filled skies play cards with my notebook's wife." that made me stop and re-read the lines a bit until I decided what I thought it meant. That and I think Purple just played into the mood I was in at the time of voting.
Filth, pure filth... That's what you are.
#8
VOTE PEEPS VOTE


mmmmmmmm

PEEPS, grrrgglee
Vivamus mea Lesbia, atque amemus,
rumoresque senum seueriorum
omnes unius aestimemus assis!