#1
Alright, this song is for the black metal group in my sig, but I'm a critique whore .

DISCLAIMER: NOT FOR THOSE WHO DISLIKE MINIMALISTIC BLACK METAL. THIS IS AN 8 MINUTE (NEAR 9) SONG WITH FOUR RIFFS AND THREE OR FOUR INTERLUDES, TOTAL.

Enjoy!
Attachments:
yb.zip
R.I.P. Charles Michael "Evil Chuck" Schuldiner
B. May 13 1967 - D. December 13 2001

Quote by eggsandham2
cuz ppl hate how power metal they are cuz they think its "gay" or w.e, which is immature and dirogitory
Last edited by Slaytanic1993 at Oct 2, 2008,
#2
Dude, this is absolutly amazing, im comsumed by this piece of music. it sounds alot like Opeth, Technically its complety different but just some of the notes you picked are very Opeth. somthing else i loved was that the riffs had alot of the same note/chords. even the new riff was just the same chords as before in a different order. dude, 10/10. if you record this piece of genuis. please please pm me.
#3
Awesome work. Would've been cool to hear this with a real band. Medolic as well as black and gloomy. Keep up the good work. Keep your style!
#4
One of my favorite pieces that I have seen posted here in a while. The Acoustic/Synth intro really got me into it, and the way that flowed into the next part before the verse was great. I loved the natural way the acoustic and synth faded out. The rhythm part for the verse sounded great with the synth behind it, and flowed very well. The transition into the ambient part after the 2nd verse seemed kinda rushed, but the riffs were good. I really enjoyed the lead section in that. The harmonies were good, but really didn't add much to the piece. It could have easily flowed from "Lead Section" to "Re-Riff". Again, the same riff as before. The new riff was good, but not particularly distinguishable from the one before to the casual listener, especially if you had vocals over it. The song was good from there, but then stopped abruptly. For some reason, that really grated with me, I liked the way you had the acoustic part at the end, but it needs a better transition into that.

All in all, I really liked the song. 9/10, just a few things like i mentioned before.

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#5
Why, thank you all.

I will crit your song, silhoettica. I try to keep my songs as natural sounding as a MIDI will allow.

Seems I've found my niche in black metal
R.I.P. Charles Michael "Evil Chuck" Schuldiner
B. May 13 1967 - D. December 13 2001

Quote by eggsandham2
cuz ppl hate how power metal they are cuz they think its "gay" or w.e, which is immature and dirogitory
Last edited by Slaytanic1993 at Oct 3, 2008,
#6
Wow, this is really ambient stuff you got here. Damn Slay, that's good stuff.
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