#1
hey just put this song together for the blues duel in the blues sub forum and i wanted some different opinions on it. its just improvisation over a backing track so don't expect some composition or anything.

the songs on my profile.

Be honest and its C4C.

Thanks
Feelin the Blues


"The Blues are a simple music and I'm a simple man. But the Blues aren't a science, the Blues can't be broken down like a mathematics. The Blues are a mystery, and mysteries are never as simple as they look" - BB King
#2
I like your licks and tone.
I think it needs to sound more natural, and you should try to groove with the backing track more.