Nice. I liked it. However, I'm pretty sure that the main riff consists of octaves, not powerchords... Also, try to get a better handle on Marty's phrasings, because that's what makes Marty Marty. His subtle gestures of vibratos and bends are very unique and it's worth analyzing.

Crit my new work? (in sig, Electric Fugue)

...modes and scales are still useless.

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