#2
It's a bit choppy and out of time in the begging, then the section when you went a bit mad lasted for way to long [were you stoned when you recorded this?] It sounds like an experimental thing you do over melodic music that carries it. It just doesn't work by it's self. Nice try at doing something different though.

C4C?

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