#1
Hey, i pretty much just made this in a couple hours so I was just wanting some feedback and critiques.
Thanks, Austin.


Angels To Sinners

Untold stories unfold in my hand
As I appear useless to comprehend
As The power, The secrets, The strength itself
Flow through my head with nothing else

No humbleness left what so ever in my mind
As I begin to unfold what's left from behind
My eyes wide spread with just a glance
.........................................................

From Angels to sinners
We fell through the floor
Destroying our thoughts, our hearts, our World
Lovesick home To homesick love
Uncaringly discarding what we have in above

Heart struck words that tear my life down
Sudden shock and falling without a sound
No thoughts nor words left to express
This burden I carry by myself

From Angels to sinners
We fell through the floor
Destroying our thoughts, our hearts, our World
Lovesick homes To homesick love
Uncaringly discarding what we have in above

So take this life
And make it yours
I choose to believe
In what is sure...
#3
Whats sounds cliche to you? because I think that the chorus is a little cliche but I just wanting to know so i could fix it.
Yea sure.