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Mister Glass man, can you hear me in there?
Where have you come from, do not despair
What thoughts and dreams float in your hollow head?
Or can you not think? Do you wish you were dead?

Look at the moon and stars, Do they change you at all?
The crescent faced entity to lighten your fall
Do you come from a world more wondrous than ours?
Mister glass man, don't cry, I know it's hard

All those people living just for themselves
An Opaque vision in your lifeless heart

Chorus:
Mister glass man
Why should you care?
Mister glass man
You're never alone
Until you give up hope

Mister glass man, do you miss your wife and children?
Taken advantage of until your time was spent
Can you even remember love in that transparent heart?
Beating away, It never wanted to start

Mister glass man, how have you survived so long?
How can you keep on going when everything's wrong?
Never trust a hope, it just results in pain
What the **** happened to this once great game?

All those people living just for themselves
An opaque vision in your lifeless heart

Chorus:
Mister glass man
Why should you care?
Mister glass man
You're never alone
Until you give up hope

The shards of you adorn the ground
Mister glass man died without a sound
Plunged to his death in his loneliness
I hope, wherever he is, he finds homeliness

Oh, Mister glass man
I could never bear your pain
And after all you've done for me
I'll never be the same

Oh, Mister Glass Man

Pleas Crit I'll do C4C.
#2
Well, that was a pretty good read.
I think you have some beautiful ideas going on in that head of yours.
I like it, I do.

My least favorite parts --

"The shards of you adorn the ground
Mister glass man died without a sound
Plunged to his death in his loneliness
I hope, wherever he is, he finds homeliness"

I dislike this. It seems contradictory to the previous lines. From your descriptions, he already sounds homely. Then that last line just kinda makes you second guess the condition of the title character. I dunno. Maybe its just me.