#1
this is the third song on my band's myspace, obviously about zombies and such


BEING A ZOMBIE ISN'T AS FUN AS IT LOOKS (AND IT DIDN'T LOOK THAT FUN TO BEGIN WITH) --full song title


RUN!

Raising, bloody from death, hungry for flesh
Gore-ridden, rotting nightmares from the grave
Dead and cold, tearing at our screaming feast
This is the zombie apocalypse.

Never ending, we are the living dead
Run and hide, stay alive
Never dying, our hunger drives us on
Shoot and scream, face it you’re ****ed.

Don’t forget to save a bullet for yourself.

Man, woman, child, and black guy—we’ll spare none
We bathe in the blood of the fallen ones
Carrion grim reapers, bringers of death
Our howls fill the night and the streets run red.

Never ending, our hunger drives us on
Run and hide, stay alive
Never dying, we are the living dead
Pray and weep, face it you’re ****ed…

So ****ing ****ed!

Eating your legs, we are condemned!
Chewing on your girlfriend, we are the dead!
Devouring on your brains, we are condemned!
Feasting on your body, we are the dead!


to hear the real thing come give a listen!

www.myspace.com/haildarksupremacy
come check out my band

we're an experimental blackened groove metal band


DARK SUPREMACY
#2
That's pretty good. A good balance between gruesome, dark, and comic. I like it. If you'll do crit4crit, I've got a song on the first page called Fight.