#1
Inspired by Metallica, Avenged Sevenfold, Bullet For My Valentine

A Decay of Guilt
Makes Roses Wilt
And Destroys What We Built
Remember when I said
I was so ashamed
nothing since then has changed

Its Soo Undignified
To Remain In The Absence Of Pride
Self-Esteem Will Subside
i'll Take My heart And Hide

I've Let my Self Down
When I Became unbound
Can you Hear The Sound (Of Hearts Dying)
Your Anger Is What I Fear
Please Forgive Me my Dear
Can You Feel The Tears (Souls Are Crying)

Its Soo Undignified
To Remain In The Absence Of Pride
Self-Esteem Will Subside
i'll Take My heart And Hide
Its In You I Confide
i Wished To be By Your Side
And Now I Feel Like I've Died
Its Soo Undignified

I'll Say This One more Time
Please Dont Say That Its Fine

i Wanna Take This pain Away
Find Someway for Me To pay

Its Soo Undignified
To Remain In The Absence Of Pride
Self-Esteem Will Subside
i'll Take My heart And Hide
Its In You I Confide
i Wished To be By Your Side
And Now I Feel Like I've Died
Its Soo Undignified

A Decay of Guilt
Makes Roses Wilt
And Destroys What i Want to Build
#2
With a good rhythm, and the right singer, this could turn out pretty cool. As I said on another of your songs, if you'll do crit4crit, it's in my sig.