#1
Inspired by Metallica, Avenged Sevenfold And BFMV

The Night Was Cold, And The Road Was Long
(To See you, Its Where I belong)
Further i Get, More Nervous i Feel
(And Im Pretty Sure This Is For Real)

We Sat Together On That Bench
(Let My Love Be Passed, Let my Heart Be quenched)
It Never Felt Soo Right, But Never Felt Soo hard
(My Heart Is open, I've Let Down My Guard)

With You In Mind, My Fears Subside
I Am Not Blind, Our Love Will be Twined
Take My Hand, Read The Words And...
Understand, These Songs Were Written All
For You

You Know The Words You Read Were True
(Words i Speak, Make Me Feel Like a Fool)
All I Want, is you to feel love for me Too
(Dont Let My Heart Tear in Two)

With You In Mind, My Fears Subside
I Am Not Blind, Our Love Will be Twined
Take My Hand, Read The Words And...
Understand, These Songs Were Written All
For You

Dont Pull Me Along
you Know We Both Belong
Together
These Ties Were buliding Are Strong
Will Our Love Will Ever be Gone?
Never

With You In Mind, My Fears Subside
I Am Not Blind, Our Love Will be Twined
Take My Hand, Read The Words And...
Understand, These Songs Were Written All
For You
With You In Mind, My Fears Subside
I Am Not Blind, Our Love Will be Twined
Take My Hand, Read The Words And...
Understand, These Songs Were Written All
For You
#2
Deep lyrics dude. Keep writin. Put an MP3 up for it when its done. I'd love to hear it.
#3
Please, don't capitalize every word.
It makes it so hard to read.

Fix it and I will comment.
Follow the smoke toward the riff filled land
brutal
#4
This could be a Bullet For My Valentine song. I'm not kidding. It could use some fine tuning, but I like it. If you'll do crit4crit, it's in my sig.