#1
Yes, my first attempt with THREE guitars.
[Post-Hardcore-ish]
I think I did well.

But of course, UG's opinion is always a good thing.

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Three Guitar Onslaught.zip
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#2
*Is impressed*

None of it seemed forced which is good. In the chorus it sounded like some of it was clashing, might just be me though?

And a few other occasions it sounded kind of like something was clashing.

The lead at 118 kind of was a bit of a mood killer. The last 4 bars were a good way of ending it.

Overall pretty good, just a few things sound like they could do with some fixing.
#3
okay. thanks
dunno about the clashing. but i'll see what i can do. thanks again.
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#5
haha. thank you, thank you.
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#6
Very cool. For some reason in the outro I was expecting harmony on the riff. The riff would go for 4 bars and then it would continue with some sort of Maiden-esque harmony over the top. Don't ask me what interval cos I'm not sure exactly what I mean, but yeah that's just my opinion. Otherwise, very good.

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#7
that was impressive dude. i like how they all actually blended together.

but i agree with regression at the 118 part. you should have some sort of transition into it instead of going straight for it. like have i put in a short 1 bar interlude of just opens, and it made it sound alot better. but just mess around with it

still amazing nonetheless
#8
That was sweet as dude, I'm not usually one to give advise/criticism, but it was ended well, and it seemed to flow through the whole song.

Keep it up man!
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#9
wow Honcho Grande choo can play three guitars at once


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#10
Sweet.
The drum intro got me jacked as sh*t, the feed back/fad in during bar 16-18 was good too.
The only thing is that it was hard to hear some of the guitar riffs at points, but with 3 guitars it can be tricky. The feed back fill is so cool man, the one from bar 16-19 that's defiantly my fav part

Good tune
#11
loved it, the break down before the pre chorus was sick but the buildup after it was sorta anticlimactic...... just my opinion