#2
Yeaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
whooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

Quote by EJD
Reminds me of that drunkard who ran out of beer... he was so desperate, he drank furniture polish.

He came to a horrible end... but a beautiful finish.
#3
thers no impact or umph if you know what i meen put still keep it up
This is a MotherFxcking Invatation
#4
thanks for the comments

i redid the rhythm track and added a lead track, check it out, sounds much better
Last edited by supralightning at Oct 8, 2008,
#5
thanks for the crit man.. and nice song title hahaha, brings back some memories. i dont think quality is worth critting, because by the sounds of it you were definately going for that doom sound, and you pretty much got it :P the leads could be a bit more interesting, but they fit for the most part. nice work
#6
Pretty solid piece overall, at the start it felt like it was building up to something that didn't come until near the end. being an instrumental, I think a solo and/or a kind of epic climax would fit quite well somewhere. But of course that's just my opinion adn you may not want that.

Thanks for critting mine
#7
I just wrote a doom inspired instrumental too! Except I haven't recorded an actual version yet, just a Guitar Pro midi version. No solo yet, cause I didn't write one for it.

http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/xHellbound/music/all/play434059

Your piece is pretty badass I must say. I must know where you got your realistic drums from.
DFH = Drumkit From Hell?
Last edited by xHellbound at Oct 10, 2008,