#1
hey guys, so last night i was pissed off for certian reasons, i wont really get into it, but idk why but i just picked up a pad of paper and started writing, it flowed like magic i spent a couple hours making this.. song thing..
i dont really know if its any good
and this is the first time ive used ug for writing advice,

so i read when your writing a song, its better to start off with a riff or guitar or bass intro

but does it really matter?

and the song i wrote has a bunch of full sentences but im not really sure how to voice them exactly, like heres a line from it

theres always a war im fighting on the inside and your fake hugs and smiles fuel the fire.

so how would yo go about making it short enoguh to be said at once but still have the same effect?
the wholeeeee songs like that
#3
theres always a war im fighting on the inside
your fake hugs and smiles fuel the fire

break it in half
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#4
ya of corse break it in half, but it only sounds cool the way im thinking of it if its all at once,
im thinking like a kind of monotone think but like a chant or anything i just dont really know how to say it

i said i was a noob