#2
lol wut?
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#5
The first paragraph was by far the best of it - strong alone and made for a good transition into the body. As far as the whole story goes, it was more than a little entertaining. The tone did fluctuate a bit, in places becoming less credible - i.e. 'substances' came across as weak, though that very well may just be cultural differences (around here even 'drugs' would be a more likely term used). The second to last paragraph was brilliant, and brutal, in the way you disillusioned the reader with the sensuality.

I suppose the tone in certain parts is my only complaint.
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