#1
above and beyond.
the mirror at a right angle that promises everything will only win
especially if its living in sin.
it's all about the meditation.
from within and without a thought
my fingers are taught across keys like purest sleeze.
juxtapose your prose for the shows.


If you can critique this objectively I will do the same to you.
Once We Were Anarchists
#2
The philosophy and abstractness is good, but annoying to a point. Overall, it sounds pretty good, although I have no idea what the hell to make of parts of it. If you think I was actually helpful enough for crit4crit, it's in my sig.