#1
First of all i am the guitarist in my band (DeatQuote) but i have had this mumbo jumbo in my head for awile so i wrote it down and liked it So not the best song but in my opinion not the worst either if you have a good name post please thank you

On the road that i have taken one day walking i awaken
amazed to see that where im goin
Where im goin is Where im from
CHORUS
This is not the place i thought
This is not the dream ive bought x2
Just a fever of fate ive caught

Now its just me and my hard driving guilt
behind a wall of emptness ive allowed to be built
Im just sitting in my body waiting to run
back to my youth with its laughter and fun


THis time ive wasted in my own regret
spent in these place i will never forget
just sitting and thinking of the things i have done
The crying the laughing the hurt and the fun


Chorus

Now im stuck in these places i thought didnt exist
Those same places i will never forget
Im just sittin in my body waiting to run
back to my youth with its laughter and fun

if i wouldve opened my eyes
i couldve have found somethin that lies
beneath it all
There tryin to make me fall
but now i will stand
Walk alone if i must across this land
Chorus 2x to Fade
#2
Quote by awall1022
First of all i am the guitarist in my band (DeatQuote) but i have had this mumbo jumbo in my head for awile so i wrote it down and liked it So not the best song but in my opinion not the worst either if you have a good name post please thank you

On the road that i have taken one day walking i awaken
amazed to see that where im goin
Where im goin is Where im from
CHORUS
This is not the place i thought
This is not the dream ive bought x2
Just a fever of fate ive caught

Now its just me and my hard driving guilt
behind a wall of emptness ive allowed to be built
Im just sitting in my body waiting to run
back to my youth with its laughter and fun


THis time ive wasted in my own regret
spent in these place i will never forget
just sitting and thinking of the things i have done
The crying the laughing the hurt and the fun


Chorus

Now im stuck in these places i thought didnt exist
Those same places i will never forget
Im just sittin in my body waiting to run
back to my youth with its laughter and fun

if i wouldve opened my eyes
i couldve have found somethin that lies
beneath it all
There tryin to make me fall
but now i will stand
Walk alone if i must across this land
Chorus 2x to Fade



it flows well honestly its not toooo cliche but it gets there, really good otherwise though, hey you should critique some of my work, if u go to all threads by me in my profile you could look up all of your soldiers and better side of me
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One day, when the time has come,
The truth will shine, we'll never run.
We both know just how feel,
I'm praying to god that this is real.