it isn't like riding a bicycle
or remembering how to shift gears.
maybe, keeping balance is appropriate
or trying not to close yr eyes at the wheel.
so simple and hard.

sleep is only sound in you,
taste flourishes in yr wetness.
like black suits and comic book heroes.

caught by calves
i feel sleepy enough to swim.
Last edited by pixiesfanyo at Oct 8, 2008,
i can't begin to explain the wave of peace that washed over me when i finished reading this.

the only thing i picked up on was:
close your eyes
yr wetness.

i just kinda wished they both spelled the latter example.
There's a road that leads to the end of all suffering. You should take it.

- Jericho Caine

secret, aaaaagent maaan.
secret, aaaaagent maaan.

"Success is as dangerous as failure. Hope is as hollow as fear." - from Tao Te Ching

i read you like i read modernists.
I don't try to understand everything your saying, i just enjoy the beauty of the words, and try to make my own meaning from them.
maybe this was more of an imagist piece but either way.

why am i telling you this?
I dont know either I just like reading what you write, and this piece was no different.