#1
Its still not finished, only got the intro and verse done, can't seem to make up anything fitting after it though.
Critique and help for continuing it appreciated!
Attachments:
Metal song.zip
#2
why does it sound so bad?
did you make it with a crappy keyboard or something?
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#3
Bar 14 onwards, it needs some mids. 22 it just needs something for backing, it seems really empty.

At 26 maybe bring in a melody with like quavers? It needs something there.

After what you've done, maybe bring in a few more instruments, and have it build up? Have the drums play an open hi-hat instead, then lead into a solo or something?
#5
Quote by led,rainsong
why does it sound so bad?
did you make it with a crappy keyboard or something?


Gah, some people obviously havn't heard of general midi. This isn't a recording, he's just scoring the music, and playing it back as to give him an idea to what it will sound like recorded. Ofcourse in a real recording you will have real instruments, and alot more dynamics, but when writing on your own it can be hard visualising what a whole piece will sound like together, writing all the individual parts yourself.
#6
Quote by led,rainsong
why does it sound so bad?
did you make it with a crappy keyboard or something?


He probably exported the Guitar Pro file as a Midi file. Usually sounds rather bad


Intro and solo are really good! Verse should sound awesome with some lyrics.
Last edited by Musicman_91 at Oct 8, 2008,
#7
Well, it was ok.
However, the thing that starts around bar 14 was really bad, but thats my opinion.
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#8
Quote by Regression

At 26 maybe bring in a melody with like quavers? It needs something there.



I don't quite get what you mean, please clarify
Thanks for all the crits so far though, always nice to hear what other people thinks