Damn I really liked it, just make the tones shinier in like the verse parts. In the more guitar intensive parts, leave it how you have it.
dude i'm truly impressed. you MUST keep this music venture thing up! guitar tone sounds much better- you tightened up really well too rythymically.

I like your voice and the little things you added "give me a sign... ah"

you take any vocal lessons or anything?

thanks for the crit by the way
Real nice man. Did you make the solo tone yourself or use a preset/download?
i dialed it on my amp and added an eq so yea its my own i guess
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