#1
new song...

burst through the skin
a welcome pain coats my lungs
breathing in fire
and exhaling control

although i hate what i've become, i'll never forget who i was
although i hate that i've become this: sickness. supply

this bane of society
only strengthens comformity's
hardened veins, calligraphy
spirals. soon you'll see

idiosyncratically
marching for days
tugging at nerves
and gouging at eyes

deep-seeded hate can permeate, yet only love alleviates
deep-seeded hated can permeate this crisis. supply

this bane of society
only strengthens comformity's
hardened veins, calligraphy
spirals. soon we'll see

with voliatility i redraw the night sky
small town calamity haunts us who've died
with voliatility i redraw the night sky
cinderburst

this bane of society
only strengthens comformity's
hardened veins, calligraphy
spirals. soon we'll see

with voliatility i redraw the night sky
small town calamity haunts us who've died
with voliatility i redraw the night sky
cinderburst


hope you like...
Quote by emoboy027
Is fingering an emo chick that likes yoy and that has fallen in love with you is it wrong to you to finger her during lunch outside in front of everyone at the high school? would you not care or lol even wish it was you?

Youztoobz
MIDI Magicalness!
#2
That was excellent! I really liked the use of "hardened veins, calligraphy". Really cool feel to the song. Out of curiosity what type of music do you listen to/ what style music would this be placed to?
this one is for you.
#3
im really into old hardcore (and new hardcore....i guess)
and my band sounds like an old NYHC band with pop punk elements and single note runs
Quote by emoboy027
Is fingering an emo chick that likes yoy and that has fallen in love with you is it wrong to you to finger her during lunch outside in front of everyone at the high school? would you not care or lol even wish it was you?

Youztoobz
MIDI Magicalness!
#4
Oh cool, I could definitely see that working with this song.
The reason I asked is because when I read this I got a really big Tool vibe from it.
this one is for you.