#1
so i started a band recently, and we wanna start writing, so in class today inspiration just hit me and i wrote this down, and i know its not perfect, but i just wanted some feed back too, i also invision this song to be like starign out with a pretty finger picking riff and some vocals than just explode into a slam u on ur @$$ rock song

Over and out!

Throw away the old, bring in the new
It took a long time to see it through,
I took so long to wake and see!
Now the old is over and out!

That’s why the old is over and out!
That’s why the old is over and out!
I took to long to wake and see!
Now the old is over and out

A simple life, with many snags
Twisted and warped.
My mind was cold, numb to the truth
Now, the old is over and out.

Now the old is over and out,
Now the old is over and out,
I seemed out of luck and out of time
Now the old is over and out!

How could I not see?
What I was,
How could I not see?
O what I was!

Dug in to deep to see the light
Now the old is out bring in the new
Now the old is out bring in the new
Now the old is over and out

Dug in to deep, to see the light
Now the old is out bring in the new
Now the old is out bring in the new
Now the old is over and out

How could I not see?
What I was,
How could I not see?
O what I was!

Dug in to deep, to see the light
Now the old is out bring in the new
Now the old is over and out
Now the old is over and out
Dug in to deep, to see the light
Now the old is out bring in the new
Now the old is over and out
Now the old is over and out

How did I go so long, blind to the truth,
Now the old is over and out
Now the old is over and out
Now the old is over and out

NOW THE OLD IS OVER AND OUT!
#3
welcome to the songwriting thread read the rules and FAQs about posting your lyrics it was ok it could use a bit of work and I didnt care for how you kept repeating Now the old is over and out but thats just me