#1
Just another metalcore song from me. Its a bit more thought out than most of my songs. And I know I got a lot of stuff I can still add to it.

Crit for Crit.

*song down later*
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Last edited by FlyingPooooo at Oct 25, 2008,
#2
Nice, will you be adding a solo? As I saw at the end it comes to "Insert melodic minor solo here". :P Loving it though, can't wait to see the solo.
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#3
Sure will, the thing is im terrible at transcribing a solo.
=/

I have one written but it sounds nothing like it when I transcribe it.
Its my curse.
-Gear-
Mesa Triple Rectifier---Bogner/Line6 SpiderValve---Orange PPC 4x12

-Pedalboard/Rackmount-
Alesis MidiVerb4--BBE SonicMaximizer 442--Ibanez TS9
Boss DD-3--Morley Mark Tremonti Wah

-Guitars-
Ibanez ART-100
Ibanez S-470
#4
I like it! I think the repetitivness of the riffs makes it sound a little like gojira. The slow melodic part that starts after 43 on is brilliant. But then it ended? :S I think it's too short, it dies and Its seems like a song that should go out with a bang!

But so far It's tip top!

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#5
I really liked the drums, and the sawtooth fitted in very well. Yeah like Horgande said there's a lot of potential for a very nice solo here.

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=984249 C4C?
#6
I think I get what you guys mean. I'm working on the 'bang' right now.
How about this? I changed a few things actually. So pay attention again.
=D
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-Gear-
Mesa Triple Rectifier---Bogner/Line6 SpiderValve---Orange PPC 4x12

-Pedalboard/Rackmount-
Alesis MidiVerb4--BBE SonicMaximizer 442--Ibanez TS9
Boss DD-3--Morley Mark Tremonti Wah

-Guitars-
Ibanez ART-100
Ibanez S-470
#7
I loved The First Riff... Atmospheric and Heavy
Good Work at the drums and the bass
Very Nice song
8.7/10 for me (=
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#8
Hey, sorry I took so long to return your crit.

This is an awesome song. It's heavy without being br00t4lz, which is cool. Reminds me of Alesana and The Devil Wears Prada, both of whom I love. I particularly liked the dissonant part starting at bar 31 (I think). I agree that it's very atmospheric. Excellent use of bass too, especially in the breakdown, which I really enjoyed. Bar 87 onwards was also really good. 9/10
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