Its basically just an intro and verse, havent got round to doing anymore yet. I play both guitar parts and used my guitar for the bass aswell, just programmed a simple drum beat in ableton to play along to. Just wanna hear other peoples comments and views, im not easily offended, so go for it
Link to my UG mp3s
I could see the lyrics as a "you screwed my life up" situation.
I like it :P
But its your idea, do what you want.
But it all sounds good so far.
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