#1
C4C


Jill's Song (What I Get Up For)

(Verse 1)
I play to the rythm of the falling snow
Once again the night comes dark and cold
A look of beauty upon her gentle face
Let's me know that I'm in another place
A place I can call my own
So,

(Pre-Chorus)
I look on the hillside, where the shadow of the oak lies
And I see her staring at me, Through those gorgeous eyes

(Chorus)
And When I see you there, sitting in the shade
Your colors erase my gray.
And When I see you there smiling through the day
I know what I got up for today.
And as I go to sleep tonight,
Arms around my pillow tight,
Scared to wake up lest I find,
That I've lost my mind

(Verse 2)
Never before have I ever felt like I do.
I never stop thinking about you.
You're on my mind longer than just a while.
You're the one who always seems to make me smile,
No matter what we go through.

(Pre-Chorus)
So, I look on a hillside, where the shadow of the oak lies
And I see her staring at me through those gorgeous eyes

(Chorus)
And When I see you there, sitting in the shade
Your colors erase my gray.
And When I see you there smiling through the day
I know what I got up for today.
And as I go to sleep tonight,
Arms around my pillow tight,
Scared to wake up lest I find,
That I've lost my mind

(Bridge)
Is it the butterflies in our stomachs?
Or the weakness in our knees?
We can unlock love, baby
When our hearts are the keys?

(Chorus)
And When I see you there, sitting in the shade
Your colors erase my gray.
And When I see you there smiling through the day
I know what I got up for today.
And as I go to sleep tonight,
Arms around my pillow tight,
Scared to wake up lest I find,
That I've lost my mind

(Outro)
And when I go to sleep tonight,
With my eyes closed, shut tight
Ready to dream so I'll see,
That you're always with me

C4C
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Last edited by popeye100 at Oct 11, 2008,
#2
This is....amazing love songs get old but this one, it really wasnt that cliche like I expected good job I didnt really see any mistakes good job if you want to crit mine feel free to the link is in the sig
#3
Thank you very much
Quote by cpt_pimp
my last fail was breaking up with my gf.

that's going to suck for a while


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Well, not really haha!


#4
therealtater said it well. not what I was expecting. good original. I will make on suggestion take it or leave it in the 3rd line of the bridge I would say: 'How can we unlock these feelings baby' or something to go along with the heart keys.
#5
Tankx for the crit man... and I'll do my best to see if I can come up with anything for that line
Quote by cpt_pimp
my last fail was breaking up with my gf.

that's going to suck for a while


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Well, not really haha!


#6
I did a little editing to the lyrics... see what you think...
Quote by cpt_pimp
my last fail was breaking up with my gf.

that's going to suck for a while


Quote by leg end
Well, not really haha!