#1
I just threw this together today to kinda start myself in the direction of making my own material. This is pretty much just an intro and a verse but I would love some feedback on it. get back to me and let me know what you think I should do to improve it!

Thanks!
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Downward Spiral.zip
Last edited by FFDP_Metal_Head at Oct 9, 2008,
#2
Defiantly extend it. Its really cool though, nice, original and simple but not to simple. Not much to say to correct it, just extend it. Keep on making your on material its the best thing someone can do. Don't think of other bands when you write.