Hi people, first time I've posted in the recordings forum

I've made a jazz piece for music class and I was wondering if you could all crit it. It's about 3.5 min long, and I need to cut it to 2 minutes. So it'd be great if you could tell me what you think about it and what parts I should cut from it. It's a .midi file that was originally written in Sibelius, I can give you the original .sib file if you have Sibelius and want to see it.