It's very simple and a lot like an Amon Amarth riff. I like it I might suggest maybe spicing up the rhythm a bit. you have some action goin on for the lead. Since it is metal, you might want to take the rhythm, and instead of rests, add palm mutes for the roots of the chords. That should intensify it a bit. If you make any changes or updates, repost, I would like to hear it again.

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Pretty nice stuff, reminds me of Amon Amarth riffs and they are always good.

I think this is a good start and you should definantly continue working on this and finish it.

I don't got much else to say about this other then I thought it was good and had nice use of guitars.

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Nice, sounds like Amon Amarth. You should make it sound a bit heavier by instead of resting, do something like palm mutes.
Haha this is weird. Ive never even heard of Amon Amarth before and i guess it sounds just like em. Oh well lol