very cool song, especially the interlude, it fit in perfectly. The drums and bass stood out mostly though. The guitar work could of had more to it but thats what I would do. Good song, nice and structured.
Nice start, well half way through more like . To be honest my favourite bit was the intro with the clean guitar as it went really well with the rest of it. I can't really get used to that verse riff though - I think instead of straight 16ths, you should mix it up a bit by sticking in an eight note or two to give it a galloping feel. All in all a good start