#1
I need to know how coherent this song is, like if it's easy to get a meaning out of (not necessarily THE meaning, if you know what I mean).

this feeling of being pulled away
it reminds me of how i dreamed
how things would be so different
wasn't it only yesterday?
that there was no stopping, no waiting
only the future

from here
the only way is forward
i watch my life fly by

its clear
what im headed towards
pull me from my sky
from where i pulled these words

taken back
this is where it all began
throw out all confusion
give me the end
i saw in those dreams
break up the illusion
that i can do this without you

if everyday spent brought me to just this point
id like to rewind
if everyday to now brought me this far
what am i doing wrong?

too many mistakes
black sky but no stars to wish on
i used them all up. made an incision in
the fabric of my future
removed the part where i finally quit
that which roots
too far to feel

taken back
this is where it all began
throw out all confusion
give me the end
i saw in those dreams
break up the illusion
that i am too high to fall

my life flies by
as i wonder in realtime
where are the open doors?

although a few steps away in eternity
i have today to save me
change me

C4C!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
We're only strays.
#2
The meaning is something along the lines of.... A person feels their life is going no where, and they are running out of time to fix it. The general meaning came easy but I felt the structure was a bit off in some places.
for example

its clear
what im headed towards
pull me from my sky
from where i pulled these words

It feels a bit jumbled, perhaps re-think the wording.

Was pretty good piece though.
C4C either one of the ones in my sig if you want.
this one is for you.
#3
My songs don't usually come across in writing the way they are supposed to flow. Like some of the lines are spoken and others screamed in the midst of mostly singing. If you heard it you'd... hear it lol. Thanks a bunch for the crit.
We're only strays.