#1
Yeah...my recording software was glitching a bit so I could only make a rough demo. So there are a couple clangers in the solo.

It's just sort of letting out some frustrations, i've been having lately.
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#2
I like it. I think the rhythm bit is good, but you may want to tone the effects down just a hair, or at least vary the level throughout the song.
As for the lead, I like the bluesy pentatonic feel on top of your rhythm bit and I liked how towards the end you changed it up just a little bit. All I'd say for that is switch in and out of the pentatonics more frequently.
I did like how you spaced the leads out and it didn't sound like you were just sitting there noodling. Some guys never let the notes sink in really and that takes away from it all...
Overall I'd say it was a very good recording.