Hey man! For your first original, this is pretty impressive. I like the chorus 'cause it's simple and has the potential to be kinda catchy. The music is amazing as well. The arrangement and production value is very high. The only issue I have is with the vocals. It sounds as though the need to be brought up a little, either turned up volume wise or mixed better. Other than that you have a solid song. Hope to hear more tunes from you soon.