#1
I pray this is in the right section.

Okay, well here we go. I've made up a few tabs and I would like to get your opinions on them. They are not a full song, different riffs. I don't want to hear stuff like this sucks, I want to hear why it sucks. Or hopefully why it's good . I've been playing for about 1 year but I just started getting serious a few weeks ago. So, they might not be very hard to play... At all.

TAB One:

Just a little riff I made up while playing Iron Man one day.

e|---------------------------------------------------|
B|---------------------------------------------------|
G|---------------------------------------------------|
D|---------9----------9---------9------------------|
A|--7-7-------7-7------7-7-----------------------|
E|---------------------------------------------------|

e|--------------------------------------------------|
B|--------------------------------------------------|
G|--------------------------------------------------|
D|---------7---------7----------7-----------------|
A|--5-5------5-5-------5-5----------------------|
E|--------------------------------------------------|

e|--------------------------------------------------|
B|--------------------------------------------------|
G|--------------------------------------------------|
D|----------5---------5----------5----------------|
A|--3-3-------3-3-------3-3---------------------|
E|--------------------------------------------------|


e|--------------------------------------------------|
B|--------------------------------------------------|
G|--------------------------------------------------|
D|---------7---------7----------7-----------------|
A|--5-5-----5-5-------5-5-----------------------|
E|--------------------------------------------------|

TAB Two:

This is more of an intro. It reminds me of 'Welcome Home' by Coheed and Cambria for some reason.

e|---------------------------------------------------|
B|---------------------------------------------------|
G|---------------------------------------------------|
D|---------------------------------------5--7-------|
A|--5--------5--7--------7--8---------------------|
E|----------------------------------------------------|


e|-----------------------------------------------------|
B|-----------------------------------------------------|
G|-----------------------------------------------------|
D|-7--8--------8\--/5-5--------5--7-----5--------|
A|-----------------------------------------------8-7--|
E|-----------------------------------------------------|


e|----------------------------------------------------|
B|----------------------------------------------------|
G|----------------------------------------------------|
D|----------------------------------------------------|
A|--8--7--5-----------------------------------------|
E|----------------------------------------------------|


TAB Three:
Another intro maybe...

I don't really know if there is a word for it, but you play this like a chord and just pluck each string, and let the others ring basically. Sorry, I'm a noob at guitar talk.

e|-----------------------------------------------------|
B|----------------------------------------------------|
G|----------------------------------------------------|
D|--------------4---------------------4--------------|
A|--------5----------5----------5---------5---------|
E|--3----------------------3-------------------------|


e|-----------------------------------------------------|
B|----------------------------------------------------|
G|----------------------------------------------------|
D|--------------6---------------------6--------------|
A|--------7----------7----------7---------7--------|
E|--5----------------------5-------------------------|


TAB Four:

I don't like this one very much, but my brother told me not to scrap it. 'You have to save everything' apparently.


e|---------------------------------------------------|
B|---------------------------------------------------|
G|---------------------------------------------------|
D|---------------------------------------------------|
A|--8-8----9-9----11-11----9-9----8-8-------|
E|---------------------------------------------------|


e|---------------------------------------------------|
B|---------------------------------------------------|
G|---------------------------------------------------|
D|---------------------------------------------------|
A|--9-9---11-11----8-9h-8--------------------|
E|---------------------------------------------------|


e|----------------------------------------------------|
B|----------------------------------------------------|
G|----------------------------------------------------|
D|----------------------------------------------------|
A|--6-6----7-7----9-9----7-7----6-6----7-7---|
E|----------------------------------------------------|


e|---------------------------------------------------|
B|---------------------------------------------------|
G|---------------------------------------------------|
D|---------------------------------------------------|
A|--9-9----6-7h-6-------------------------------|
E|---------------------------------------------------|


e|---------------------------------------------------|
B|---------------------------------------------------|
G|---------------------------------------------------|
D|---------------------------------------------------|
A|--4-4----5-5----7-7----5-5----4-4----5-5--|
E|---------------------------------------------------|


e|---------------------------------------------------|
B|---------------------------------------------------|
G|---------------------------------------------------|
D|---------------------------------------------------|
A|--7-7----4-5h-4--------------------------------|
E|---------------------------------------------------|

So there are some of my tabs, I hope you like them, criticism would be helpful. Tell me what I can do to improve them, and what I should add. Thanks !
Well I've been messing around of guitar for about 1/2, maybe 1 year now. But I want to start getting serious. So if you have any tips or tricks that helped you, please share them with me. I know, practice... .
#2
to start out, you should get powertab or guitar pro so we can hear the rhythm and all how it should be played instead of leaving it to us. anyway.

well the first one is kinda bland, being just powerchords. maybe if you throw in palm mutes and have different rhythms at a fast speed, it would sound decent.

the second is decent. i would have to hear how you play it, the way i did is ok though

the third would sound better if the second chord was 5-7-5 instead of 5-7-6.

the fourth, im just not feelin' it. :\

but keep at it, songwriting is a skill that comes with time. what you are writing now is alot better than mine when i started out.

hope i helped
#3
hm I liked em, I am with the guy before me though. one seemed kinda bland... just needs something to spice it up. three is my favorite because I play stuff like that all the time but once again I think it sounds better like this

e------------------
b------------------
g-----5------5----
d---7--7--7---7--
a-5------5-------5
e-------------------

and so on. I couldnt really get into number four though
#4
I like numero uno, it sounds pretty cool. It's more of an intro than a whole song, because it gets VERY repetitive. Number 2 is also cool, and if you sped it up and added bends and stuff it might make a good solo. Number 3 you totally lost me, it sounds totally off. I also believe in not throwing anything away but you can get rid of 3 . I may be playing it wrong but it doesnt sound right at all. Number 4 is really good, my favorite of the 4.