#1
The Fields of Love


Can you give me one last minute?
Before I join you love?

Hey baby I miss living without sin
You were keeping me bound to this earth
You were my everything. "My only thing"

I was infatuated with you
But now everything's sentimental
When you're my nicotine. "My lovely queen"

When you left me I was dead like you.
I blew it all out of proportion
Am I too serous? "Or delirious"

*I miss skipping across the fields of
Love
Feeling like the world would never
Stop
I figured we were both just going to
Roll along
And I was wrong*

At first I thought I tasted freedom
But I was tasting what you left me
Does God have plans for us "In god I trust?"

This could be all a horrible dream
But this is all to surreal for me
Will alchemy join us now? "But only how?"

Why couldn't I have chosen to stay?
Now all I want is to be with you
Even through heaven and hell "the devil will sell"

*I miss skipping across the fields of
Love
Feeling like the world would never
Stop
I figured we were both just going to
Roll along
And I was wrong*

The Fields of love are covered with roses
But when we departed they withered up
Died, and scorched the field for no other.
I wish for nothing more than to be buried
In the fields of love
But it was too much of a battlefield.

We love more than after death.
We will stop the world for each other
Yet we try and roll on.

Love, Stop, and Roll along

For we will be together alas
In paradise under the fields of love.

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#2
love dont exist, all this is so cliche and luvey dubby..its rather revolting...lyric wise...its very flowing, graceful, and passionate
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#3
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love dont exist, all this is so cliche and luvey dubby..its rather revolting...lyric wise...its very flowing, graceful, and passionate


thanks but if love does not exist than why are we all not dead?
sometimes love is just lost. and it may never be found.
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#4
its very cliche but it is also a wonderful piece I really like the stanza

When you left me I was dead like you.
I blew it all out of proportion
Am I too serous? "Or delirious"

good job and if you dont mind criting mine the link is in the sig
#5
yah. its kinda cliche but i think it strays from that cause its still about death. reunion of lovers by death. ill get one when i get home cause i dont have any time to crit this. thanks.
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Its like getting anal for the first time. It hurts like hell but eventully ull get used to it and itll feel fine

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