#1
like 4th song i wrote tell what u think and criticise it
thanks

Rumors

Verse:
she said its not me
she said it cant be
she said nothing has touched me
she said she never did it
never did it before
with no other guy
she hasn't met before

Pre Chorus
people dont think your telling true
people like this like to take away ur life
its true.

Chorus:
Rumor is a Rumor
nobody likes it
nobody wants it
in their life
Rumor is a doomer
nothing can stop it
nothing can stop it from ruining your life

verse:
he said its not me
he said it cant be
he said no guy has ever touched me
he said he never did it before
nothing like it
he said he doesn't like this
he wants to fight this

Pre-Chorus
people dont think your telling true
people like this like to take away your life
its true.


Chorus:
Rumor is a Rumor
nobody likes it
nobody wants it
in their life
Rumor is a doomer
nothing can stop it
nothing can stop it from ruining your life
#2
Kind of literal...sounds like something I would write in 6th grade if a rumor got spread about me and I was pissed. I personally don't like it...sorry.
#3
cant say im a fan, the rhymes seem too forced ie. "doomer", its very literal and also the topic i think is a poor choice, sorry mate
#5
Quote by emP
it'll be good as a punk song.. something like sum41;o

well it is a punk song lol