#1
Apocalypse from Satan
By: Follow The Common

Verse 1:

Devil screams
Devil cries
He is stuck in hell
Until the day we die
The Apocalypse

Verse 2:

Satam comes, spreads his fear
All mankind will disapear
Into the shadows, before the rape
All I know will discontinueate

Chorus:

All hope is gone
All Love is lost
For Satan is here
We're to die
Hell on earth
Now exsits
Before our eyes

Verse 1:

Devil screams
Devil cries
He is stuck in hell
Until the day we die
The Apocalypse

Chorus:

All hope is gone
All Love is lost
For Satan is here
We're to die
Hell on earth
Now exsits
Before our eyes

Verse 3:

War in heaven
Now on Earth
For all to suffer
The bibal says its the end of all knowing
He will come
We will die
No this is no lie
The Apocalypse


Alright this is the third song written by me and the fifth by my band, Follow The Common so it is not very professional yet but I have had lots of comments elsewhere that says we have progressed well... What you guys think?
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It's not that I don't want to help you critique, but these lyrics are just cheesy. I don't know if that is your intention. If it isn't, then I suggest you to reread the Bible a bit and revise it according to the details of the Apocalypse. The Apocalypse is more than just about Satan coming to Earth. Hell I don't even know if Satan is even supposed to come to Earth. I like the use of the word "rape" though. It's great.