#1
okay so i need a story that basically is about a criminal doing something illegal and escaping into another country across the border and how the authorites of the country where the crime was committed can't do anything. the more emotional the story, the better. please be creative
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#2
At some point the protagonist will have to find a cum stained playboy in a seedy truck stop bathroom. I don't need to endulge in what happens next.
#3
He gets raped.
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At some point the protagonist will have to find a cum stained playboy in a seedy truck stop bathroom. I don't need to endulge in what happens next.


You have written an epic story with only few words. Grats to you.
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#5
a kid on an online forum tries to steal other peoples ideas.. fails.. gets caught... runs to canada.
#6
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At some point the protagonist will have to find a cum stained playboy in a seedy truck stop bathroom. I don't need to endulge in what happens next.


he licks it?
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#7
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a kid on an online forum tries to steal other peoples ideas.. fails.. gets caught... runs to canada.

hilarious. im not going to copy any of these ive just got writer's block and im hoping to get some ideas going.
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#8
A guy hires a maid, and then when she arrives at his house, they both have hot, wild sex.

Hope this helps.
#9
murder over a affair,has to flee the country then stars a new life in the new country but cant bear themselves and there is a plot twist leading to the climax then the resolution.
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#10
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faps hard,has to flee the country then stars a new life in the new country but cant bear themselves and there is a plot twist leading to the climax then the ejaculation.



fixed.





#11
After the protagonist leaves the seedy truck stop bathroom we learn that this isn't an unusual activity for his over the top sexual appetite. The next scene involves him getting off of a bus in a smoggy urban downtown district. As he approaches an adult toy store his eyes meet the eyes of a gothic, suicide girl looking clerk, both of their eyes then slowly move to the giant neon yellow double ended dildo in the window. He then enters the store and a "back in 20 minutes" sign is placed conspicuously on the locked door.
#12
The main character of the story (we shall name him Tom) murders and rapes a woman. The reason he did this is because he has a mental condition which lead him to believe that said woman was having a lesbian relationship with his current girlfriend.

An epic car chase scene will ensue where Tom is driving a large truck knocking other drivers off the road. Due to his sympathy for disabled people he turns sharply and crashes when he sees a person in a wheelchair being rolled across the street. He rolls out of the overturned truck and the border is in sight. luckily for him the police car that was chasing him hit the spiketrap some 200 yards back. He quickly arises to his feet bloodstained and determined to make it over the line. Someone on the sidewalk will shout "Tom!! Faster!! Run!" while he sprints for his goal. He willl eventually make the border unharmed by the police.

Anyway the rest of the story is his girlfriend trying to persuade Tom to return to the country so he can be arrested and signed into a mental instution. Go from there.

Yes, I did type all that out just to make the Tom joke. Too much time on my hands.
#13
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The main character of the story (we shall name him Tom) murders and rapes a woman. The reason he did this is because he has a mental condition which lead him to believe that said woman was having a lesbian relationship with his current girlfriend.

An epic car chase scene will ensue where Tom is driving a large truck knocking other drivers off the road. Due to his sympathy for disabled people he turns sharply and crashes when he sees a person in a wheelchair being rolled across the street. He rolls out of the overturned truck and the border is in sight. luckily for him the police car that was chasing him hit the spiketrap some 200 yards back. He quickly arises to his feet bloodstained and determined to make it over the line. Someone on the sidewalk will shout "Tom!! Faster!! Run!" while he sprints for his goal. He willl eventually make the border unharmed by the police.

Anyway the rest of the story is his girlfriend trying to persuade Tom to return to the country so he can be arrested and signed into a mental instution. Go from there.

Yes, I did type all that out just to make the Tom joke. Too much time on my hands.


then his partner in crime russell betrays him and he yells: "RUSSELL, WHAT THE ****!!!"
#14
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After the protagonist leaves the seedy truck stop bathroom we learn that this isn't an unusual activity for his over the top sexual appetite. The next scene involves him getting off of a bus in a smoggy urban downtown district. As he approaches an adult toy store his eyes meet the eyes of a gothic, suicide girl looking clerk, both of their eyes then slowly move to the giant neon yellow double ended dildo in the window. He then enters the store and a "back in 20 minutes" sign is placed conspicuously on the locked door.


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The main character of the story (we shall name him Tom) murders and rapes a woman. The reason he did this is because he has a mental condition which lead him to believe that said woman was having a lesbian relationship with his current girlfriend.

An epic car chase scene will ensue where Tom is driving a large truck knocking other drivers off the road. Due to his sympathy for disabled people he turns sharply and crashes when he sees a person in a wheelchair being rolled across the street. He rolls out of the overturned truck and the border is in sight. luckily for him the police car that was chasing him hit the spiketrap some 200 yards back. He quickly arises to his feet bloodstained and determined to make it over the line. Someone on the sidewalk will shout "Tom!! Faster!! Run!" while he sprints for his goal. He willl eventually make the border unharmed by the police.

Anyway the rest of the story is his girlfriend trying to persuade Tom to return to the country so he can be arrested and signed into a mental instution. Go from there.

Yes, I did type all that out just to make the Tom joke. Too much time on my hands.


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a kid on an online forum tries to steal other peoples ideas.. fails.. gets caught... runs to canada.

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