sounds pretty cool, lot better than some of the crap i come up with.
that first and second riff really capture the motocycle riding style of guitaring playing (love em) you should find a drummer who uses alot of percussion for those.
We have an awsome drummer, pretty amazing I believe. He doesn't like to play metal/super fast but he has some sick drum beats.
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You sound very good. Nice solo. However, I wouldn't advertise original works on the web for all to see, unless you are trying to build songs. I mean, I think it is very rare that I would try to post my lyrics on the web, because there's no guarantee that someone won't take them. Good stuff, all in all. Make a band recording, dude.