hey everyone, the songs on my profile http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/shreder666/music/ its called song idea(prog death?) its short since it isnt really a song yet, it was mostly improvised riffs so thats why the timing might clash sometimes between guitar tracks... if you want you can crit the other mp3s on there and ill make sure to crit back as fast as i can!
Recording quality aside, you play good and I think you can definitely form this into a song. Just pick out the parts that work best, and fix or change the ones you think could be better. The transition near the middle could have been a little better, but other than that I thought from riff to riff it was fine. Great work on your lead, and very nice job of improv and riff creation. keep it up-

Sounded alright, but I cant give you much critisism because of the recording quality.