#1
Hi all

New to formum so first of all lets get all the formalites out of the way.. hey hey hey :P
anyways.. i tend to spend loadsa time on the ug website so thought id finally register. im totally addicted to my acoustic guitar and writing lyrics. you could say its the love of my life (sad) lol

Been working on this song for only two days... when i was completely off my cake and revisited when my brain flew back from that rotten little nest some peeps call a hangover

here is a short version of a song im currently working on and i would appreciate comments or even a joint lyricist to create a number songs with me per month. you call this song "young ones" let me know what u think


you took my hand
u taught something new
i was a dreamer
and the world seemed brand new
u gave me hope ,u gave me choice
i gave everything, but a voice
you gave me style, you gave me grace
and I felt at one again with the human race

you lead me astray
into a world that is cruel
I was a little boy
and I looked up to you
u gave me hope ,u gave me choice
i gave everything, but a voice
you gave me style, you gave me grace
but your disappeared without a trace


because were all but young ones
living in a precious world
you gave, it all to your loved ones
who couldn't, tell for the smoke
but when its becomes all clear
they miss you, by there side
because where all but young ones
until the day that we die
day that we die
until the day that we die
day that we die
#3
There's a Collaboration thread in the S&L Techniques suforum that may help you.
Have a look at that and see if it helps.

Read the rules in the announcement at the top of this forum to see how things are done.

Good luck.
Meadows
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